I had members of my class watch my draft music video and this is some of the feedback they gave my video:
Laura listed: - lighting needs sorting, band shots are a bit shadowy.
- actors work really well and costume looks good.
- casual style of shot works well/collage type video works for song
Mae listed: - Some of the lighting needs sorting
- should only be one singer, bit random. Having the shy boy (she means Matt on Bass Guitar) for a second of it.
Alex wrote: "Some of the drumming and singing look shy. Clips are sometimes really random not linking anything. Really like the casual shots in town in front of wall and skating.
Balpreet listed: - good shots used especially close ups
- Narrative slow
- Boys having fun
- lip syncing not on time
- drummer seems upset?
Jack wrote: Good miming, nice locations, clothes fit, nice banter, more shots to finish
These are some feedback points I listed from my teacher:
- Look at the framing of shots
- Only half done but can see concept being formed
- Rainbow t-shirt (Tie dye on Danny the singer) key
- Keyboard prominate in video, add more shots
